Friday, November 4, 2011

Swing Still Swaying Comments

Rating: 5.0

swing still swaying
the way it did when i was a kid
riding it high
reaching the skies
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Jonny Brackney 25 January 2012

this is my favorite of yours i think

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Kevin East 07 December 2011

Ethereal in feel. The cruel nudge of nostalgia. Short but not sweet...touching memories of many i think. Well done sp

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Biff Mcguire 10 November 2011

Inocence removed, and memories are the food of life. Loved this one!

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Richard McClellan 07 November 2011

Reminds me of the swinging swing in our yard that I put up for my neice KK... Great Poem my friend!

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Kaila George 06 November 2011

This is so true...so many memories...its sad that we grow up to only remember what we had...smiles bravo bravo...love this poem

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Crimson Love 05 November 2011

This poem is truly phenomenal, Your words tantalize the minds whom read it, with imageries so divine, truly a spectacular write.

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Darkangel Flyfree 05 November 2011

Good poem about memories of the past. Sometimes the past can create good poems. Thank you for your comment on my poems.

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Zane Lewis 04 November 2011

Love this poem. Memories give the deepest connections.

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