Friday, March 21, 2014

'Swing' Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Under the preponderant clouds
wishing mist on the outskirts of cities
The crowd roves and raves
Speaking with the hearts of dead men
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Nathan Coppedge
clouds Cities standing
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Nathan Coppedge 01 June 2014

Thank you, Michelle, again for your comment.

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Michelle Claus 01 June 2014

Evocative. It creates a sense of hovering for the reader, and reduction. But maybe the final stanza is uplifting?

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Nathan Coppedge 22 March 2014

Thank you so much (Re: Reyvrex) .

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 22 March 2014

Such an abstract poem. Enjoyable to read.

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Nathan Coppedge

Nathan Coppedge

New Haven, CT
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New Haven, CT
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