Saturday, November 24, 2007

Swimmingly Comments

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Swimming is feeling grace in water,
smoothly slipping thru light blue fluid,
propelled by kicking feet
and winged arms.
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Harlan Simantel
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Natalie Silva 08 September 2011

I like this! I am on a swim team, and this reminds me of it. I love swimming, and it is hard to find poems like this one that does'nt talk about beaches, lakes, or ocens. haha, good job. Love it. :)

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Harlan Simantel

Harlan Simantel

Hillsboro, Oregon USA
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