Swimming With The Sunset (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Swimming With The Sunset (Haiku)



when sun's at twilight
I'm lying nude on it—to
jump into the sea

Tuesday, April 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: swimming,sea,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
hi 08 January 2021

concerning but ok

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Susan Williams 11 May 2018

Oh! This is Haiku at its finest! Could not resist that Come Hither and Read Me title and WoW! This poem fulfilled its title's promise. The imagery, the metaphor, the sumptuous beauty- - 10+++++++++++++++++ and a spot on my fav list! !

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Kelly Kurt 04 April 2018

Metaphorically and literally beautiful

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