'Swimming With A Shark' Comments

a wonderful poem of the dangers of pursuing something dangerous? ................superbly written.

A fine extended metaphor of love and swimming.

To warm me; with the muse of love. Nice work.

I love the concept! The sense of style you brought to this one! Niiiice lol!

A lovely poem, well articulated and penned with insight. Love is a spiritual experience that cannot be influenced unduly, an experience that makes its entrance into the heart without knocking and also departs without warning. If it's there, it's there. And if it's not there, it may probably never be there. It's a beautiful poem. Thanks for your remarks about my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Excellent Bernard. Just Brilliant! ! ! !

Great poem! Great analogy! We are all shark bait.

Friend, how wonderfully you bring out hidden feelings! To love or not to love that woman is a ever unsolved question of the complex human mind. I liked the rhyme and as usual I love the tone of this poem.Marks 10

Nice poem to describe a good matter, that is no doubt of an intruder of heart. Anyhow, your poem is great in both language and expression.

i can totally relate 2 dis 1..luvd da way u've written it

dis is sumthn i can totally relate 2 n felt so gud reading it, yea tat feelin kindda sux..da way u've written it is realli nice