Swimming Sun Comments

The joy that the sun brings indeed is found in the life that lives in, dwells upon the waters. This work has such magnificent imagery. A great poem, Kumarmani.

Swimming Sun! A perfect eye-catching title and a lovely memorable image for the reader to take away with him. Thank you!

wonderful way of describing, you make a tale like poetry, really enjoyed it :) especially this: Sun is swimming towards Earth, Welcoming and embracing tightly,

After swimming more from dawn to dusk, Sun will be tired near dusk to rest, Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly....Beautiful contents! Loved reading it dear sir..Thanks for sharing! Swimming sun is thinking to smile again.

After swimming more from dawn to dusk, Sun will be tired near dusk to rest, Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly, Swimming sun is thinking to smile again.

The imagery, the feeling, the scene, are magnificent! Beautifully painted words embalming with enchantment! A wonderful poem!

An uplifting visual delight and I love the concept of the sun swimming as it truly appears to be when rippling in the reflection on the water. Well done Kumarmani.10 +

No rest! ! The Sun! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

'After swimming more from dawn to dusk, Sun will be tired near dusk to rest, Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly, Swimming sun is thinking to smile again.'...everything has an end and a fresh start. Very nice poem on sun. Enjoyed. Deserved more than 10.

This poem is of beautiful images from nature.

its been a long time i c since the sun set ur sun on o poet me why ji

A great imaginative write. It captures the beauty and wonders of the Sun. Yes, we could see God's grace through the rays of the sun. Beautifully crafted write.10

Dear Kumarmani, such a heartwarming prose poem....10++++

Green juice is prepared for sun by leaves, After swimming more from dawn to dusk, Sun will be tired near dusk to rest, Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly, Swimming sun is thinking to smile again. Great thoughts, scientific as well.