Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Swimming Race Comments

Rating: 4.3

Butterflies, Complete panic,
A thrill of excitement.
Watching the water, pure and clear,
A feeling of wanting, drilling through my mind.
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Alex Kreager 13 May 2011

This is awsome! I feel like im there! Good job look at my poem 'Swimming'.

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