Thursday, May 21, 2020

Swimming Pool Comments

Rating: 5.0

Be patient in the heat strokes sweetheart,

There is a shy rose hidden in the thwart,
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COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 18 November 2022

Cupid has stretched his bow just wait for the dart...fantastic! A wonderful poem, absolutely wonderful!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 May 2020

I am missing something, yes I am missing something, At a swimming pool I have lost my romantic heart. so have I looking for her in the sea she has nothing on but glee smile please

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Kevin Patrick 23 May 2020

Beautiful poem, swimming pools make for an excellent retreat on a hot summers day. Im reminded of my favorite summer memories.

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A lovely and entertaining poem. Swimming pools give us fun especially during summer time. A nice place to unwind and meet beautiful friends. Beautifully crafted write.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 May 2020

An amazing poem sir! Thoroughly enjoyed it.....10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 May 2020

love in Fun! but very beautifully written; enjoyable... your body is a nature's work of art, Soon they will calm down the hostile sun, .....

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