Saturday, December 31, 2011

Swimming Fish Comments

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Clear glass like water
In it the swimming fish
Like the ideas........
Sometimes, it shows its beauty
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cherassery damodaran binish
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Silverinna Annastasia 17 March 2012

I quite like this one, Binish, because we are all little fish in a giant world of water.

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yellowbell alamanda 17 January 2012

NICE! we are all fish swimming in the wide ocean of life..we just have to swim on as they said flying. :) thanks for sharing Binish!

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Tanyarose Poemsandwoes 13 January 2012

very cute, to the point, yet with depth. Well done!

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Claudia Krizay 09 January 2012

Very good poem! -makes me wonder too where this fish will go...

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Vipins Puthooran 07 January 2012

dear Poet, this's a wonderful poem! ! ! ! we can see the abyss if we drown in it / Beautiful penning..really a great poem! ! !

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June Smithster 06 January 2012

cadence rhythum flow you write this poem like the fish moving there

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 05 January 2012

Great poem, i real liked it.

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Dave Walker 05 January 2012

A very good poem. Really good.

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Neetha Sasidharan 02 January 2012

nice comparison. simple but beautiful

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