Tuesday, April 19, 2016

Swimming Comments

Rating: 5.0

The brightest water shimmers in the light
The water shines with light, so blue and clear
All still before the competition starts
I grasp the block and wait to hear the call
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Carmen TA
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Dr Antony Theodore 19 April 2016

The time has come to show how fast I am I take a stroke and I am flying high The feeling of the water flowing by. what a great determination in your words dear poet..... this is a lesson all the youngsters should learn...... thank you very much.... tony

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