Thursday, March 4, 2021

Swim For The Shore Comments

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Swim for the shore of salvation
To be free from fiery ocean,
Let not your soul suffer and die,
Just overcome the tide so high,
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Ravinder Kumar Soni 04 March 2021

Beautiful, simply beautiful, my brother Bernard. You have made me find me.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 March 2021

Great poem. My brother. Its great to see you swimming in non acrostic poems. Yeah, faith is a powerful emotion.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

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