White rapids rushing for the falls,
Morgan horses loosed from their stalls,
From fragrant sunsets to nightfalls,
Songbirds answering southern calls.
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As a fan of rapids, sunsets, songbirds and especially glorious Morgan horses, I love the words, but especially the depth and meaning (as I am able to comprehend it) of this incredible and wonderful poem. Sensational.
line 11: i'd start with " A" to make reading easier (for me) i'd punctuate differently. :) i don't think the title word " swift" fit everywhere, but it certainly did in lines 1 & 2, in my favorite stanza (the first one) . AND it WAS short (the poem) , so i read it swiftly! bri :)