Saturday, July 27, 2013

Swept Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am swept by visions of glory,
Given to flame and burnt to the soul.
Of touching bonds in raging fury,
For I am half and we are whole.
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Andrew Barber
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 06 August 2013

wow, you are good at it. It is as if I am reading a romantically erotic/erotically romantic novel Very nice

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 July 2013

Excellent write. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading it...Well written.

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Valerie Dohren 27 July 2013

Excellent write Andrew, you captured the mild eroticism very well.

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Dave Walker 27 July 2013

You certainly did what you was asked, very tastefully done, And a beautiful poem. Really great work.

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