Monday, March 20, 2017

Swept Away Comments

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I'm swept away
By a tidal wave
Of new emotions
I've never felt.
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Edward Kofi Louis 03 November 2018

Of new emotions! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 03 November 2018

Thank you, Edward Kofi, for reading & commenting! : -)

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Sandra Feldman 21 March 2017

All changes with Time, As it evaporates in us, Memories and pain, A blurring syndrome So we don't go insane And yet, everything, Though less poignant With a mellowing refrain, Does remain. You're emotions, in this poem, are transmitted in a most unusual and mysterious good way.

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Practicing Poetess 21 March 2017

Sandra, I'm sure you'll concur- - The good feelings /memories are the ones we cherish, the ones that we want to retain. The bad ones? I'd just as soon give myself a case of amnesia concerning those! Thank you for your valued appreciation of my work.

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