Friday, February 21, 2014

Swells Of The Canyon Comments

Rating: 4.7

I lost my heart to a man
of the ocean
Sunlit gold locks, fell in waves
such, the sea
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Susan Lacovara
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Mervyn Graham 03 March 2014

A wise poet once wrote.... How can my poor heart be glad, When absent from my sailor lad; How can I the thought forego- He's on the seas to meet the foe? Let me wander, let me rove, Still my heart is with my love; Nightly dreams, and thoughts by day, Are with him that's far away. I can see you with hanky in hand waving from the dockside... my poor lass you've been through the wringer. (hope you know what a wringers is)

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Anthony Burkett 22 February 2014

To cast our net of wishes upon a sea of desire... and for that sea to swallow it whole... we wonder why.

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Lynn Anne Brown 22 February 2014

Lovely Poem, strong imagery that pulls the heart out to meet the mind.

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Susan Lacovara

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