Wednesday, October 25, 2017

Sweetness Of Sweets Comments

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Traditional sweets keep taste and love,
We love to have these in festive seasons,
Fried in deep oil, dipped is sugar syrup
Which is saffron laced, it gives sweetness.
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Susan Williams 28 October 2017

Ha! This poem had me up from the computer and in the kitchen rummaging for a sweet treat about half-way rthrough the poem- -I have so little will power. I can hear the siren call of sweets a hundred miles away. I miss the deserts my Mother cooked for us to dress up an ordinary meal with a festive sweet touch, I miss the candies she would bake, I miss her pies with their so perfect crusts. Most of all I miss her lovely face across the table. I think your closing lines were absolutely superb at wrapping up the contents of this sweet poem and topping it with a bow: This is a nice art to learn and hold wisdom, Sweetness of sweets pleases mind and soul, Wisdom carries sweetness of light of mercy, God feeds us ever sweets of wisdom and peace.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Awesome dear friend 10+

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Mihaela Pirjol 28 October 2017

They look delicious! And the poem is sweet too!

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Paul Brookes 28 October 2017

What is life without the a little sweetness it brings in light and makes us happy great piece enjoyed thanks

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 October 2017

I can clearly feel your refined taste, sir. Very sweet. Thanks

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 October 2017

These are the traditional sweets prepared in our homes during special occasions. Like to have some now looking at the photos. Very nice. Enjoyed the poem.10++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2017

mouth watering sir gulabh zamuns and jalebi aLso RUSS-gullass too ALL Love here the NORTHERN HEMISPHERE DO VISIT US O POET DEAR

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Rini Shibu 25 October 2017

I love to eat jilebis, mouth watering poem..10

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