Tuesday, July 3, 2007
Sweetly Summer Is Comments
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feel the air.
it is so warm and soft, like a hug.
you cannot escape it, and the truth?
you'd rather not,
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Fallen Too Far
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William Jackson
03 July 2007
Excellent poem! I really like it. The title is cool too. (That being said, I think for the very last line you should change deadish into dead.) Then again, what do I know! Nice write.
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7/25/2025 9:35:26 PM # 1.0.0
marvelous. i can feel the summer flowing through even in this cold air-conditioned room.