Tuesday, February 27, 2018

Sweetheart Still Open Is My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

While getting out of my heart
To lock its doors you forgot
Shall you come back or you shall not
Sweetheart! Still open is my heart.
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Valsa George 16 March 2018

A lovely invitation to come and occupy a permanent seat in a heart left open for ever! A beautiful write!

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Rini Shibu 04 March 2018

Heart which is open forever and welcoming the sweetheart to get inside..Beautiful poem about everlasting love

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 February 2018

Lovely! ....Strokes of hot winds and blows of cold breeze Could not close the doors of a heart in waiting Why the birds don't sing; while flying no mating, It's too cold, my love, and before I freeze....lucid expression! Loved reading it.....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 February 2018

It's too cold, my love, and before I freeze Why I‘m hopeful you shall come at last Sweetheart! Still open is my heart............still open.....Beautiful expression of past life in love and till today. Enjoyed with photo provided. Thanks.10

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