Thursday, October 1, 2020

Sweetheart No More Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never thought
I shall get an opportunity again
To welcome you at home,
For a new pain!
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Akhtar Jawad
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M Asim Nehal 07 October 2020

A wonderful translation of a beautiful poem nicely done keeping emotions intact. Awesome 5**

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you did a nice job. i've translated it into my mother tongue

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 October 2020

A very touching and poignant poem. Beautifully crafted and expressed.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 October 2020

just beautiful JA SIR Was missing you with tears whether you were unwell Now I am happy you returned but my DEAR PH SEND ONLY EMAILS NO COMMENTS ARE POSTED ON OUR PAGES HOPE YOU ARE NOW BETTER SIR WAS IT THE VIRUS? ? BEST RGDS

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 October 2020

What if my happiness is stolen again? Sweetheart, no more tears! .....fears, tears, emotions, love...step by step cross all thru times either in favor or unfavor.....excellent...

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Varsha M 01 October 2020

Aabhar aapka sirji. Aapne mere khayalon ko bahut behatreen roop se bakhoob robaru ussi tarah angreji ke makhmali sabdo me piro diya. Bahut bahut dhanyawad. Bahut aacha laga aapke is behtareen kavita ke liye.

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Varsha M 01 October 2020

Aabhar aapka sirji. Aapne mere khayalon ko bahut behatreen roop se bakhoob robaru ussi tarah angreji ke makhmali sabdo me piro diya. Bahut bahut dhanyawad.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 01 October 2020

If i say this is good it would be an understatement. This is goodly good. Straight from the heart of a poet who understands another humans feelings. Sir keep on translating these gems so that we can share. Thank you.

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