Wednesday, January 17, 2018

Sweetheart! It's Sweetness I Miss Comments

Rating: 5.0

You have lost me in an impulsive moment
The bitter words you spoke still I feel,
But don't kneel, yes, please don't kneel,
Stand confidently and be fully transparent
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 June 2018

I SMILE when I read romantic words... I am so happy so many love the love word... I thought I alone owned it and you are another one.. who shares the love in return we have come to this mundane world only to spread love and romance and in return love alone earn and here it is not really sexual it begins with moms and pops and siblings friends and kids then only wives and gfs

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2018

Shade of a natural color! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Indira Renganathan 19 January 2018

Sweetheart! It's not heart, it's sweet I miss! ...only you can write such meaningful and dolorous love poem....great Akhtar...thank you

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 January 2018

This is a classic write. Beautifully crafted with many meaningfull lines. This has been weaved with a loving hand.10

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Muzahidul Reza 17 January 2018

Sweetheart, Sweetwords, Sweetmoments are always expected, excellent write By Dear great poet, Mr. Akhtar Jawad A candle of words is to be lit. The strife will end with a long sweet kiss .................... wonderfully penned, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++ 10

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