Thursday, September 3, 2009

Sweetheart! (C) 9-3-09 Comments

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Sweeter than honey unforgettable tastiest custard
Catch up you see the heinz ward off the mustard
Up enough courage to relish his feelins
Bitterly skip around the old country in heels in
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Zahir Kijani
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R Collins 20 March 2010

Wow this is a really good poem. I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme that you used through out the poem. And I don't think many people can use Heinz products to describe a person the way you did.

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

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