Tuesday, November 15, 2016

Sweet Wild Honey Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sweet wild honey! !
The tree of life and the muse of love;
Like the story of the last Black Pharaoh to present my work to you,
With the muse of the traditions of the African people.
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Edward Kofi Louis
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Sister Frances 20 November 2016

I love this poem, it has beautiful imagery of an African landscape of a culture and of how time is dictated by nature. Very well written and there is a lot of love behind your words :)

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Valsa George 15 November 2016

In a way challenges are meant to straighten up our crooked ways! This time you have experimented with narrative poetry, Edward!

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Unwritten Soul 15 November 2016

I love more when you write longer poem and with this style...it just a amazing combination of meaning, wording and everything for a beautiful poem

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