Sunday, February 14, 2016

Sweet Valentine (Senryu) Comments

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Tia Attwood
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Terry Craddock 18 February 2016

nice, I liked the contrast between 'forever bond through marriage' and 'eternal life sentence' for some reason I keep thinking over your lines, different contrasts, the differences in nuances in arrangements

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