My melancholy was gold dust in your hands;
On your long hands I scattered my life;
My sweetnesses remained clutched in your hands;
Now I am a vial of perfume, emptied
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Artuistic, poetic, great melancholy, most deserving as the Classic Poem Of The Day. Congratulations 5 Stars Full Score!
Nicely expressed thoughts and feelings, a poignant piece of poetry
Sad love. So beautifully, but painfully and poetically described. Far reaching for its poetic h
Wow! ! ! ! Talk about Incredible! ! ! How Beautifully Done! ! ! Congratulations! ! ! Really Wonderful Poem! ! ! Thank You for Sharing! ! !
Sweet tortures in life always give us the power of endurance. Beautiful thoughts!
How much sweet torture quietly suffered...... Congratulations for being selected poem of the day.......
Now I am a vial of perfume, emptied. Superb conceptualization so also the whole poem. Thanks for sharing it here.
Great poem, a very poignant one, coming out of the heart of a tormented soul. I think the poem echoes the groans of millions of women through out the world. Thanks.
whoa, I kind of read this through quickly, not quite catching the depth of the pain and regret until the last 2 lines smacked me in the head. Then I went back and re-read it sinking deeper and deeper into that melancholy with each line. Powerful, and—indeed—haunting
When, my soul wrested with shadowy sadness, She who knows the tricks, I passed the days kissing the two hands that stifled my life Beautiful. Thanks for sharing it.
Amazing enough!