Sweet Temptation Comments

I plea to you. ..... maybe i plead you or i beg you or my plea to you, but i don't think I plea to you. and..............tbere is no eye, ..........please take more time to proofread before submitting. i've liked both poems i've read, but it is distracting when i find typos etc. i like this poem so much, i shall send it to MyPoemList. It will stay between you and I.............i'm sure some others would write it this way, but i believe (since you and I comes after between) between you and I should be written between you and me. of course you could be using 'poetic license' to cheat a bit and get the eye/I? what do others think? i especially enjoyed the lines: Because tbere is no eye, It will stay between you and I. Though God won't forgive you, I will. Because a sin is well shared, If it is ours to bare..................................very nice!

sweet temptation, very good one, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.