Sweet Temptation Comments

Love emerged in genial copiousness. Passionate and real in natural cravings... impeccable lines dutifully charted.

Provoking and very romantic... I like the way you have appealled to my sense of imagination. i bet it only takes a hopeless romantic to come up with such a piece. Great poem, i love it. write more! ! ! !

I don't need a road map or a tourists guide to get the sado/maso flavor of this delicious little morsel of writing. One thing, Brittany, I think you wanted to say two word, chasing and casing. I think you wanted him to catch you. Just my hunch. But, I could be wrong. You are Very Talented. Thank You for allowing me to read your work. I don't know if I can access any videos. I don't know if my heart could take the shock of your audio/visual eventitude....