Saturday, January 5, 2013

Sweet Sting Comments

Rating: 4.8

I know a damsel as beautiful as a bee
She never stung anyone except me
Her lips are made of honey and spice
She is my beloved and smother than ice
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Howard The Motivational Poet Simon
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Lyn Paul 28 January 2018

A sweet tasting sting.

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Nosheen Irfan 25 January 2016

Sweet sting...what a paradox. The title is very captivating and equally captivating are the lines that follow. My heart forever buzzes for my bee...Artfully written. Love the B sound.

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Patricia Grantham 03 April 2015

Your poem is as sweet as the honey. One have been stung many times by love. How adoring this is.

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* Sunprincess * 18 October 2014

........oh this is beautiful and sweet as honey :)

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Clarence Prince 26 July 2014

While your is buzzing for your bee, try and avoid her stings and enjoy the rice! Well done, blessings to you!

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V P Mahur 20 July 2014

Dear poet, If a bee is so lovely why can not one buzz around her. Sweet write. Thanks a lot for nice appreciation.

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Heather Wilkins 22 June 2014

the sweet sting of the bee is always a pleasurable event, short and nice

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Heather Wilkins 22 June 2014

the sweet sting of the bee is always a delightful event. well done

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Hazel Durham 01 June 2014

A lovely write full of honey and spice and all things nice!

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Kanav Justa 04 March 2014

a sweet poem you wrote, , , , nice

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 26 February 2014

As sweet as you......Simon..........the sweetest sting ever I have read.........

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Valsa George 24 February 2014

So sweet is your poem, sweet as your 'honey'!

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Sallam Yassin 15 December 2013

sweet like honey and rich as home warmed with sense of love in heart

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Danny Draper 12 March 2013

Succinct declaration of love for your queen bee.

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Marieta Maglas 17 January 2013

Beautiful poem, Howard. The pure love is the right and the best path to God.Enjoyed reading your poem.God bless.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 January 2013

A nice lovely rhymin poem so enjoyable. Do read mine too.

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