Saturday, November 30, 2013

Sweet Sticky Bed Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.8

With a soft flowers of marshy blanket
A gentle breeze touches muddy pillows
Bouncing delicates coils of arms
Wraps tightly on asheet of madness
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Captain Herbert Poetry
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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 01 April 2016

ooh my kkkkk i can imagine...sweet n sticky...healthy two hills with pinkish shadows, hahaha, awesome this is awesome

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Helena Zen 06 May 2014

....a gentle breezing poem drifting into nicety of the poem. Brilliant! ! !

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Vilma Gomez 04 May 2014

Full of sensitivities of this poem. So delicate in refine manner. Great poet

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Jessica Hernandezdamian 25 April 2014

Love the poem. Its very sweet and dreamy indeed.

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Shania K. Younce 25 April 2014

I fine this poem to be written in a fine manner. Bien!

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Munashe Rupazo 06 December 2013

This has become my best poem, it is so poetic in literal manner well done!

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P.k Freitas 30 November 2013

This is sensually sweet sticky dream indeed... Nice write

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