Saturday, October 1, 2011

Sweet Sour Apple Bites Comments

Rating: 4.3

Orchard of apple and variety
Here you come, the apples lover
Come sing and praise like always
'Shining around the skin
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2018

'Green or Red Bite sweet or bite sour I must love you my apples simply because... I am the true apple lover' Explained hunter.....haunting expression with an broad outlook. Whether red or green, sweet or sour a true apple lover tastes it, so also a person with divine power feels the same as to hurdle or ecstacy. He faces difficulty and enjoys ease. A great philosophical poem shared startlingly. Thanks.

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Bri Edwards 30 November 2013

well, even though i was living not too far from where steve was dying, i never considered this poem to have anything to do with computers. i was thinking apples, the fruit, and sex/romance. i guess i'm just an american guy! ! ! thanks for sharing. as for an apple a day................... i have a little poem about that for you other folk who, like me, thought this would have to do with apples, especially if you like (what i hope is a little) humor. :) 27 An Apple A Day....... [Apples; Health; Stupid Guy; Humor? ; Pretty Short] online 8/17/2013

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Ruby Honeytip 30 December 2012

Live safe from regret.....beautiful: -) I like red apples btw.....but I'm a Samsung girl lol. Great poem...great message 10/10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 22 November 2011

I enjoy an apple now and again? ? ? ?

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Sonali Sings 13 November 2011

I see your poem from slight different perspective... As a fruit is dear to a gardener so are all kids to their parents... no matter how much pain they give while upbringing, what results they may give in future, they are all beloved to their caregivers... Brilliant work! ! !

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Harindhar Reddy 31 October 2011

A very good poem on apples directly but indirectly it applies to humans. Just like apples have different colors and tastes we human beings look different physically and our attitude and behavior varies greatly. These lines are lyrical in style...... 'If i am green A sweet sour love Bite one, bite two Bite still Taste me my apples lover...... While I'm am reading from onside, from other side mind went back to SAROJINI Naidu's poem 'Bangle Sellers'. I take pleasure in reading this poem. Let me doff the poet for her skillful artistic and noble work........

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Rekha Mandagere 10 October 2011

Different shades of life is cotrasted with the red and green shades of apple which is vital for life.You made life beautiful comparing it to tasty apple, sour or sweet, life is beautiful! But i like red sweet apple more than the green shade. You give me only that from your garden :) Nice write, fantastic imagery. Marks 10+

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I took time to read this and repeatedly grasped every word, am wowed, especially the beggining lines,

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 08 October 2011

a real apple lover will love the apple whether it be red or green like in love, a lover will accept and love a person in all her sweetness and sourness, in all her best and her least that is how i see this poem and yes, it makes sense.

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Hosny Soliman 03 October 2011

Dear Soul, i read it all even what credit to Hamed Khaled.For sure i will be back to read Khaled's poetry later. Now i will tell you what came to my mind before i read your short point of view about what you wrote.At the same time i think that every good poem can give every one what and how he can see and feel it. For that i think that piece of poetry is really good that it gave me different meaning than both of you and Khaled too. To start with 'Orchard of apple and variety'it means that there many other fruits.Also the words 'apple's lover and hunter'.The word apple must take me to Adam&Eve and the apple.The word hunter can mean some one looking after or search about something.Also hunt can mean repellent or chas after something with bad intentiont.I think with apple we must say pick an apple, to hunt it mean forcibly. Back to the orchard from your point of veiw it an orchard for apple and fruits.But for me i think it was an orchard of women also with variety.LOL May be i have a dirty imagination but as you know i'm a painter like the beauty every where specially the women beauity.Also your words'Pluck, taste, pite'takes my imagination to that way. Dear soul i can be wrong but all i can say that really a good poetry i enjoyed it very much.Thanks for every thing. Yes i want to add that your idea about go through sweet and sour experiences in our life by this way it really great.

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 October 2011

Great annotations and anecdotes on apple and the combined appleton therapy as poetic prophylaxix with most adorable member Ahmed Khaled from Russian Federation.While not only it covers all the experiences surrounding the centric syndrome of an apple whatever be its colour but also has a deep social message concerning the humanitarian aspect of living.This poem therefore is an aesthetic and of paramount importance to its readers.I appreciate hereby as one of them.Thanks for sharing us your views.

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Cristina Teodor 02 October 2011

Sweet or sour, life experiences will fulfill our desire to make a dream come true. Taste from the life apple instead of having regrets from not trying at all. An outstanding analogy, great composition..Cristina Teodor

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Eric Cockrell 02 October 2011

follow your dream no matter the cost! good poetry!

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Asif Andalib 02 October 2011

We go through sweet and sour experiences in our life. Both have lessons for us and we should accept the bitter experiences and be patient cause life will bear sweet fruits some day or other. Very nice allegory. Thanks for sharing.

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Amir Forougi 02 October 2011

A very delicate one packed with the metaphors of nature and beauty...10....

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Shadow Girl 02 October 2011

Love this lil bro lol! ! ! This is such a beautiful and meaningful piece...great write...leaves me thinking -SG xo

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Crimson Love 01 October 2011

Such a beautiful poem....I know I love apples ;) hahahaha Very well written poem! Extraordinary :)

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this poem is so beautiful, it is telling me a story, just wonderful. i love this meaning behind the poem it is a great meaning you encourage alot of ppl just by a few words. well done. you have done a great job, you dont have any idea what impact you have on others as they read this poem. i give this a 10. just speachless of what i coylfd really say.

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Matt Mooney 01 October 2011

I like it. The whole idea is great and original. Reminds me of 'Follow that Dream' as sung by Elvis Presley which was an inspiration to us, the young people of the sixties. Check out my poem 'Falling Apples'.10.

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Vipins Puthooran 01 October 2011

It's a great tribute to the 'apples lover' and a dedicated poem...and an approbation for a great work... (Desire/do what you want) .... I like the expressions and the inward blith mind... It's wonderful poem and top marks for you soul...

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