Saturday, September 19, 2009

**************sweet Sorrows***************1978 Comments

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we met many years ago
in a time which we forgot.
i had really loved you
but you had loved me not.
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 June 2010

Backward wheeling of ‘sore memory’…of jilt…sometime makes magnanimous…other times vacuous …'sweet sorrow' is satire what I understand… thanks…sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2009

you walk right up to me as i had done before. the thoughts flash through your mind as i laugh and say 'goodbye'..opportunity once lost can't be had next time... lovely piece of writing and good old memeory too....10 rad mien love at first sight....good bye....anywhere....innocence regained

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she was foolish and lost a good one. nice poem.. i like it..

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