Saturday, June 30, 2018

Sweet Sonnet Comments

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J-oy
E-njoys
S-weet
S-onnet
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 November 2019

PS. Thank you so much for responding to my question, dear Bernard and that on the next day, after I had asked you about that. HOW ATTENTIVE are YOU, despite the time-lack you constantly have. Now everything in your poem SWEET SONNET is crystal clear for me. Thank you so much from my inside heart.God´s Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family. Amen. I have read your SWEET COMPOSER and I will respond.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 June 2018

The Title Sweet Sonnet is misleading me, Bernard, so sorry to tell you this, but A Sonnet is a poem of 14 lines BUT you wrote this as you said a Vertical Monocrostic, so I really don't know what you meant here by the title. If time allows you, please a smallest explanation. Thank you so much. But so true this Vertical Monocrostic is a sweet verse as is the girl in the photograph.

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Thanks, Sylvia😊😊😊. This poem just mentions the sonnet and other words that form the vertical monocrostic... So grateful for your excellent feedback🙏🙏🙏

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 November 2019

Indeed, you are absolutely right, Rev. Bernard. The Title is only mentioned in the Vertical Monocrostic and I regard lovely Jessica as The Sweet Sonnet herself. Great compliment, Bernard! Most beautifully thought in your precious time, loveliest Vertical Monocrostic. A 10 and much more

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