Friday, July 10, 2009

Sweet Sinner Iam........... Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life is like a rain dew
it teached more than I knew
for other's I might be lovable and cute
but my love, couldn't be shared for one
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Sebastine Humaemo
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Miriam Maia Padua 16 July 2009

very wonderful the emotions and feeling being expressed is so touching.. a moving write..can move everyone's thought to wander Congratulations.....you grow more and more poetic and great.... 10+++ lovelots, maia

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Lady Grace 15 July 2009

'If my words had made you fallen in love and if my heart had caged you like a dove do come and question me with your cries''...these lines are nice..grace

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Winnie Angel 12 July 2009

Good one..quite humorous..this is simply an interesting light-hearted poem..Wow what an idealistic heart-stealer there.Great! ............Winnie

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