Saturday, October 6, 2012

Sweet Sin? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your adrenaline starts to pump
And your thought process starts to haze
And the voice in your head screaming to you
Gradually starts to fade
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Alla Simone 09 October 2012

This poem has an important message that is conveyed well. Many ppl fail to think ahead to what happens next or what will this decision cost me. The opening stanza captures the role your conscience plays in decision making really well.

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