Monday, December 7, 2015

Sweet Serendipity Comments

Rating: 5.0

She wasn't planning to meet anybody
But it happened- as things do
when you forget you don't own
the stakes to your life- turns out
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Jay Ash
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Chinedu Dike 28 December 2015

An insightful tale of fate, luck, love, and loss; elegantly articulated, well encapsulated, and nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Jay. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Rishad Mk 07 December 2015

Very sweet poem jugnu jugu I really like it. Thank you very much.

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Jugunu Jugu 08 December 2015

Thank YOU, Rishad! :)

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Kelly Kurt 07 December 2015

As such go most things in life. Thanks, Jay

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Jugunu Jugu 08 December 2015

You sure got that right! No problem, Kelly.

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