Sunday, September 15, 2013

Sweet Sadness Comments

Rating: 4.8

On those days
Broke but toys
But now if there is a sound of crack
That is straight and from the heart
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Abdul Wahab
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Marvin Brato 19 September 2013

Great thoughts, though life is not always a bed of roses we must make the most of it!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 September 2013

lovely calm and placid those days thank you

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Heather Wilkins 15 September 2013

the days of childhood are sweet and so innocent the sight of a butterfly we used to jump in joy. a good write

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Harindhar Reddy 15 September 2013

simple and lucid poem showing another D (dimension) of your poetic style! Yes childhood is remembered forever....Great message wahabji! 10/10 outright!

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