Sweet'Re The Dreams Comments

Sweet're the dreams Sour's the reality We must realize Nothing's easy...... outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem is well executed. Thanks for sharing. Five stars.

Roasting beans Making liquor Mixing and refining Conching and tempering Molding into blocks........Dreams and reality of life. very well pictured through you love for Chocolate Factory..... very fine poem dear poet. tony

Wonderful! May chocolates remain chocolate dreams and let us keep gnawing reality away. You won't believe while in Class III, my friend and I used to dream being small birds and getting into a shop through a hole on the door to eat what you know - jaggery! Those were beautiful days, sweet, all by-gone and long-lost. (10)

I love chocolates but they don't love me. You know what I mean (smile) . Sweet to the lips bad for the hips. Some of the finer things in life really do takes some hard work with very little pay. A good write this is.

It's my dream too. I love chocolate and dark one with less mixing is good for health.

I am not a big chocolate lover, however too fattening and bad for health. good thoughts on the subject, nothing is easy.

Mmmmmm, love chocolate! Ends with a good bit of philosophy too.

Yes Sir! So true - Dreams are sweet and reality is sour. You have literally put it in your beautiful write!

A lovely poem I can see myself there in the factory eating the chocs! However, there are hazards afoot, a health risk eating them and working there.

I read an article on Children's Day, it was focusing on the child labor issue esp. those children who work in the fields...the scene was quite horrible, it goes like this: It may be unthinkable that the chocolate we enjoy could come from the hands of children working as slaves. In the Ivory Coast alone, there are an estimated 200,000 children working the fields, many against their will, to create the chocolate delicacies enjoyed around the world.

your poems give a proper conclusion, showing the poem is a well-knit piece of art! ! !

The last stanza did wonders..Sweet are the dream, sour are the realities..nothing is easy.. Beautiful poem..loved it..