Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Sweet Rapture Comments

Rating: 5.0

Face to face
Do I dare?
Standing so close
Toe to toe
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Violet Val
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Violet V 29 October 2013

Thank you! A brief look into my soul... I have been away but I have returned more inspired than ever!

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Aldo Kraas 03 March 2010

That poem alone is excelent. And I give you a 10

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~ Jon London ~ 13 June 2009

Outstanding write, expression at its finest...your words of longing...the heart so filled with love....well penned

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 June 2009

The writes of your lifetime............endeavoured a masculine adrenalins.I juz luviit!

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 09 June 2009

'Once freed from rapture All that is left Is my longing to admire You' May I add... 'And you are the essence of my being within and beyond sensuality! ' You are a natural and powerful poet. 10+

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sensual... sexy... niceeeeeee

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 June 2009

'Extending, intertwining, and helplessly trying to find gravity Time stands still' Beautiful sweet love experience nicely expressed.

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