The gentle breeze blew
And whispered
To the ears of the earth
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Thanks Jez Brul for your comment on my poem: 'Sweet Rain'' I appreciate.
Sweet water, Sweet rain.... the elixir of life. Beautifully written. Full marks 10
Thanks Glen Kappy for your detailed analysis and appreciation of this poem. I appreciate.
sylva, since you commented on my poem yesterday and i hadn't read anything of yours, i decided to start just now, and this was the first poem i read. i was drawn to it instantly because i live in a high-desert climate where the average rainfall is nine inches a year but which we haven't reached for a decade. i'm a fan of brevity, so i like this about your poem. though short it's packed with vivid images- ears of earth, sweet apple, melodic drum beats... and i like how you shaped the poem- it gives it visual appeal. i look forward to reading more of your work. on the subject of rain, you might like these poems of mine- refresh, o God; rain prayer; and fat clouds. the water of life, literal and figurative, be yours always. glen kappy
Thanks Muzahidul Reza for reading and your valuable comment on this poem. I appreciate!
Great write! The poet masterly use imagery. The personification of Rain is wonderful. Keep the ink flowing
Thanks Terry Craddock for your in-depth and constructive analysis of the poem 'Sweet Rain'. I appreciate your painstaking perusal of the poem. Sylva-Onyema Uba.
The Whisper Of The Wind Before Sweet Rain Falls a soft breeze blew over the skin of the ground heard was an instant wind gust no other sound the whisper of the wind before sweet rain falls Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Sweet Rain' by the poet Sylva-Onyema Uba. Dedicated to the poet Sylva-Onyema Uba.
'The gentle breeze blew And whispered To the ears of the earth' and blew over the skin of the ground I have always loved the whisper of the wind before it rains, let the sweet rain fall :)
Those crops will soon blossom With the food of life This shows how important rain is to the growth of plants and food production.
The coolness and sweetness of nature. Thanks for sharing.
Rain! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks Geeta Radharkrishna Menon for your beautiful comment on my poem: Sweet Rain. I appreciate.