Tasted, smelled, rising from hot asphalt, sweet rain
in the street where a man works on his camper in the rain.
Like desire, felt less often now we are old, the joint pain
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It is, indeed, 'Sweet Rain" Congratulations dear Poetess for this lovely Poem! .......10 And for the honour of Poem of the day.
The street where a man works, there rain water flows and we find a nice imagery of rain after reading this great poem. Rain produces a sweet sound that motivates mind. An amazing poem is shared here.10
It sounds as though the " Sweet Rain" gave you much time to reminisce.
Love the rhythm along with the portrayal of Rain with beautiful images - a violet sky shines behind cloud cover, dense with time. Congratulations!
Sweet rain rising, lifting the dampened piano that hides its teeth beneath a lid. Sweet rain, bird song, all the rain-wet exigencies a house brings to bear..../// beautiful poem penned
An excellent poem, full of rhyme, rhythm and cherished memoirs associated with sweet rain right from childhood to the evening of life. Enjoyed the poem.
'Like desire, felt less often now we are old, the joint pain and fatigue competing with that other. Sweet rain' - Yes, I can relate!
There is nothing better than a cool rain after scorching summer. A nice poem on rain.10++++
Rain and fresh water is also called Sweet Water and helps to ionize the air just like a waterfall or the churning waves of the oceans..lovely poem a ten..
Nature is truly at it's best when it rains and as the title says, Rain is Sweet. Congratulations...
A rain is not just a down pour of water, it also has the capability of pouring rains of sweet memories that can wash your miseries and sorrows right away. Congrats on the selection of modern POD.
It is a beautiful poem on rain related to life on a metaphorical base. The penmanship of this poem is much appreciated. Thanks and congrtulation for being selected this poem second time for the poem of the day.
A great poem..! The man's sweat pays for no one's poverty...felt it inside..Sweet rain reminds many untold tales..One of the best poems I have recently come across with..! !
A fantastic portrayal of sweet rain and it's marvelous attributes. Congrats for it's selection of modern POD.
Tasted, smelled, rising from hot asphalt, sweet rain in the street where a man works on his camper in the rain. Like desire, felt less often now we are old, the joint pain and fatigue competing with that other. Sweet rain rising, lifting the dampened piano that hides its teeth beneath a lid. Sweet rain, bird song, all the rain-wet - - - - - - - - -Rain evokes such sweet memories, the present pain seems to vanish under its effect! ! A lovely poem.
This poem Also won this prize chosen by Poem Hunter and Team on 2017,2018 and today, yay! 2019. CONGRATULATIONS with The Modern Poem Of The Day. Hurray! We are also very happy to read this announcement, Mrs. Skillman. A very sweet and strong poem, loaded with many metaphors. I cite here: face, poor past, Holocaust. Let the locusts swarm, sweet rain brings them down out of the dogwood, they die by sweet rain.