Saturday, May 16, 2009

Sweet Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Inhale the cool wind of the dark night,
Soul soothing, Mind-relaxing,
Built up tension released in an instant.
Streetlights cast a deep pool,
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Christopher Montalvo
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Surya . 01 July 2009

nice, deep and emotiona poem. nice words too voted10 surya

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Naidz Ladia 24 May 2009

nice, , , the drought was over becoz of sweet rain..a nice one ha..naizz

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Fiona Davidson 16 May 2009

Beautiful sensual writing Cristopher...10+++

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Christopher Montalvo

Christopher Montalvo

Brooklyn, NY
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