Sweet Poison Of Mine Comments

The world of women is too big for him He can not make a choice Ooh sweet poison of mine! oh how you play with my emotions and my life..... swee poison...... infatuation, attractions, the so called love all experiences of the young days....... very well portrayed. thank u. tony

Sweet poison... Love deception. Affectation juxtaposed with affection. Nicely written.

I love this poem. Great work ,Linet. We relate because we all have or have had our very own sweet poison. Sweet Poison of mine....

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

This poem shows some strange behavior of a lover-thanks for sharing

there is sort of wistful and ironic funny side to the poem while its dead serious in its content, it speaks with gentle persuasion and maturity..very nice liked

You make me feel special for a moment The life of men to women whose feelings have vanished in the thin air. you are not alone in this, good poem You make many others feel the same King of many queens who is your queen How you play with my emotions and hurt my feelings Ooh sweet poison of mine!

To make a choice! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

beautiful wording & awesome creativity, keep up the good work

definately he needs to make a choice. This is just awesome creativity

Great and moving words.keep it up

it is a masterpiece, thought evoking, every line is wonderful, bursting with creativity

I love it.... keep it up