Wednesday, December 12, 2018

Sweet Poison Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet poison

I eat a mouthful of sweet stuff,
Sweet and savory,
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Prabir Gayen
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Meethi Mondal 01 January 2019

Poison became nectar for knowing the unknowable, Knowing Life totally by living it completely, He jumped into infinity,

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 December 2018

The sweet and sour, nectar and poison are similar to my being I eat delicious food and it became poison Socrates drank hemlock it become nectar I can not stop reading.. Nicely crafted poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Prabir Gayen 17 December 2018

Binayakumar Mohanty...ji..thanks a lot for your sweet comment...

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 December 2018

'I ate with pain in heart'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Prabir Gayen 17 December 2018

Thanks Edward for your hearty support...

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Hazel Durham 15 December 2018

Original, thought-provoking and great write as without experience we are naively impulsive until with experience we find answers to questions we never even thought of!

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Prabir Gayen 17 December 2018

Very sweet and beautiful comment..I love it Durham..

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David cullen 14 December 2018

β€œPoison became nectar for knowing the unknowable...He jumped into infinityβ€œ-wow great lines

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Amyy Gordon 14 December 2018

I liked the illusion of Socrates.....................nice poem..10

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Jimmy Tormon 14 December 2018

Awareness is life.. without awareness life is completely futile..had enjoyed ur poetry

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Liza Moneva 14 December 2018

Sweet is poison and poison is nectar in different situations..good poetry...

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Jane karlovska 14 December 2018

β€œI eat and become eating, I eat and eating becomes meβ€œ-Vigyan Bhairav Meditation..good😊

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Jennifer Birchall 12 December 2018

A little bit of what you love is fine... A great poem Prabir

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Riza Braholli 12 December 2018

A poem with interesting findings and a dichotomous reading. Congratulations by Dr. Riza

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Srijita 12 December 2018

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