Sunday, October 18, 2015

Sweet Poison Comments

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Must be delirious, I shook hands
with a seemingly sweet scorpion
A scorpion it was...
soon handed jarful poison
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Shreej k.c
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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 22 October 2015

Absorbed me till the end. Kept me conjecturing the effects of being stung and instilled with the love of sweet poison. Love is crazy. I liked the power of your fanciful verses and imaginings of the poison when sweet.

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Shreej K.c 24 October 2015

Thank you 😊

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Liza Sudina 18 October 2015

love to a person, eros love - is poison, it's good when it is sweet poison, not bitter, as in your poem!

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Shreej K.c 24 October 2015

Thank you 😊

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