Sweet Poison Comments

Many, who take to the pen, especially young people, young girls... these days, have experienced this very thing! Your words draw out the emotions and pain that you (and them) go through every minute, of every hour, of every day... no end in sight. That's why writing helps, It brings these ugly truths to the surface of the skin- spelling the letters in blood... HELP ME...SAVE ME...LOVE ME. Isn't that what we learn in life? Sometime, the hard way.- Great Ink! -Kelly.

Really Powerful words and expression! ! ! !

Speechless! Beauty and Love filtered through this powerful and well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you again for sharing another of your masterpieces with us! Keep it up! Romeo-NYC

Fantastically beautiful -SG x

A masterly performance! Cheers to you!

its beautiful...............

Very Incredible. You used words that would require the least amount of quantity, but to a maximum effect. Its pretty smart of you :) It also sets a specific mood that makes you feel almost as if you were that person. 10

i think poison is always sweet. great write and a nice poem to read.

Very descriptive and detailed. I would very much like to read more now.

Beautiful poem my friend, great write.

Brautwurst all around for all! Powerful medicine SPGrl.

Wonderful write! I liked it.

Your poem sings of love, even venom with, I find no place for hate, keep strong, survive then pure love shall come to be a state of mind, or so I hope..Great write, quite original and powerful, Thank you for share.

A really powerful poem, great feeling in the words. A great write.

Your poem sings of love, even venom with, I find no place for hate, keep strong, survive then pure love shall come to be a state of mind, or so I hope..Great write, quite original and powerful, Thank you for share.