Saturday, March 8, 2008

Sweet Perfume Comments

Rating: 4.9

A rose arose with rosy hue,
And made my torn heart, so sparkling new,
A rose arose as roses do,
And warmth for its guise within me grew.
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Ernestine Northover
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Chuck Audette 11 March 2008

Very song-like, sweet and fresh (but I think lilacs do smell best!) . -chuck

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Lynda Robson 08 March 2008

Simply lovely Ernestine, however when I was reading it in my mind I found it to be a tongue-twister lol, uplifting piece, Love Lynda xx

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Thad Wilk 08 March 2008

I sense a lovely scent from this poem, love the sweet perfume, a rose of a write! ! *10*! ! Thanks for sharing Ernestine! ! Friend Thad

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Amazing how they can lift the spirits... and how a poem can. Thank you. t x

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Duncan Wyllie 08 March 2008

It's as if I could smell it from here Ernestine, , your words carry a very similer perfume Love duncan X

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