Sweet Obsession Comments

Your Sweet Obsession has lead you to give us a good poem.The lines -I wish it wasn't there /Yet it is tattooed on/ In time will its ink wear /and wretched ache be gone? -captured my heart! Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year!

each line compliments well the sweet obsession great job

Cruel to be obsessed Instead it has me torn Those are my fav lines. You've described it well. This sweet obsession.

i think every poem on your page shows the next page of your life and so far i enjoyed it so much but i guess i don't like the sad part but each word makes a incredible story just like you

Obsessions are indeed difficult to relinquish, the trick is to replace it with something less demanding. Good one Stevie.

I feel sadness spilling from this poem. Unrequited somethings are nasty things [3 A beautiful write from a beautiful girl xx Hi Red: -)

Unrequited obsession. Terrible thing. But it does lend itself to poetry. Hope it's a nice work of the imagination,