Tuesday, August 18, 2009

Sweet Night Comments

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moon moon please dont be so shiny,
door door please dont make noise,
window window please wave yourself
then only the sweet wind will come inside,
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shalimar mageswary
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 June 2010

i don't know why you have to repeat the words but it's your style... it is you... keep it up... good job! nice write!

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Steven S 18 August 2009

This poem is a delight.

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