Sweet Mum Comments

Absolutely beautifully penned in parlance, stucture and a bread-warm storyline...Enjoyed this ~FjR~

sweet poem dedicated to mum. xlent.

really nice poem on mother.your these lines are heart touching- Mum sweet mum, Comfort turns loneliness with no mum, Food turns no food with no mum, What else is sweeter, honey, Nothing, not even can money, Replace the warmth of your bosom mum