Sweet Mother Comments

Oh Mother, lay your hand on me one last time, For you are my pain, my happiness, and my rhyme..... no words can sing mother's poem. always bring tears in the eyes with just memory... beautiful write. I aalmost cry with her fading memory. keep it up......10 read mine'O, mother' i thinku may definitely like it

a good tribute in sweet poem form to your mother is impressive and I can say that your mother is great lady and its her who make you maya, the talented one.. mother is the asset of life and who cares for mother never gets fail in life... my regards to her.. and respect your feelings for her sure...10+++++++++

Very Nice. Really Emotional And Well Thoughtout.10/10

very nice poem, well done, i like it thanks for sharing maya 10++

A tender lined flow of the heart, beautifully written, keep expressing