Monday, September 28, 2009

Sweet Misery Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a dream of the deepest thoughts of mine,
I could see a lady under the eyes of the stars,
Looking into my eyes as we dine'
In the finest of all love hours.
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Aditya Mudbhary
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Robin Machorro 16 November 2010

very beautiful poem and it was well written you are a great poet! :)

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John Kim 16 November 2009

It's beautiful poem. Sweet miserly is good idea.This poem's expressions are wonder and surprise. I give you 10+

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Tiffny Rhodius 10 November 2009

'Every glance, sight or vision to remember, ' Lovely poem!

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Nalathai Vongjalorn 23 October 2009

Another well written poem 10

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Krupa ... 16 October 2009

Beautifully expressed! ! ! !

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Aldo Rino Smiloveux-bell 12 October 2009

Beautifully sad about the longing for love :) .

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Lynda Robson 09 October 2009

Nice sentiments expressed here Eddy, well done, 10 Lynda x

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Marvin Brato 09 October 2009

Candid expression of love.... well penned!

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Gengis Capote 07 October 2009

good sentiment of love, enjoyed your poem...10

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soso Khan 07 October 2009

I really like this poem no joke its become one of my favs

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Obinna Eruchie 07 October 2009

'In a dream of the deepest thoughts of mine, / I could see a lady under the eyes of the stars, / Looking into my eyes as we dine' / In the finest of all love hours...' lovely lyrics.

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Georgia Girl 07 October 2009

This is very sweet and heartfelt...10

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Sans Serif 05 October 2009

I love this one. To love someone so much. Great write.

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Aditya Mudbhary

Aditya Mudbhary

Patan, Nepal
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